- New footage being used of band instrumental because feedback said it was out of time, no realistic and ineffective in comparison to the rest of the footage we used.
- Comments on location were made which inspired the use of different footage which conforms to the music video conventions we were trying to achieve
- We felt the costumes and performances within the footage were ineffective and because of this we made careful plans to make sure costume was synchronized and fits with the stereotype.
- In the final cut we altered and played with transitions adding more to create interest in the video for the viewers and to create the feeling of chaos.
- It was said that the rough cut was a little slow and in editing we sped up scenes, used fast paced transitions and in doing this it made the video quick paced and exciting.
- We got told that the video needed something unique about it and we feel the lighting used is very much so. We used a house lamp and a torch and reflector to create warm lighting which juxtaposed the setting.
- We reanalyzed the background for the band footage and decided that a fairly blank background would be more fitting. So the location is dim and it is shot in a garden at night so the rest of the location can not be seen clearly.
- In the rough cut it was commented that the instrument playing didn't look very realistic. So to correct this the people that couldn't play the instruments practiced at looking realistic despite not playing. This required listening to the music and working out the beat and where the instruments came in to the song. This made the video look more realistic and affective and gave the impression we were an actual band.